I am a student. This is a place where I will share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Seth you have written a well thought out and action packed adventure story. I enjoyed your use of strong adjectives and verbs as it brought your story to life. Well done!
Seth you have written a well thought out and action packed adventure story. I enjoyed your use of strong adjectives and verbs as it brought your story to life. Well done!
ReplyDeleteThanks Mrs Hazlett, I thought that it was a good and fun story to I hope the other teachers like it.
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